The book

Now that I’m into The Templar Legacy I have notices some thing that are vary interesting about a writer. The way this person presents the English is harder to read. Its not all that natural. He will describe in detail that could be used a little shorter and with more dialogue with the character. I can’t put my finger on it (using a saying I’m not supposed to say), but it just a little ruff in the writing. Now I can’t write this good, nor will I in the future, but it helps me to understand the flow of words, and not to draw it our with dry English. Kind of like reading a high school student write something.

The character has been developed and they have started the plot, but being into the book at over 10% I think the plot should be just a little clearer. I haven’t been reading as much as I would like. If I read a book faster, it makes the story run better for me. That’s one of my problems, and I’m working on it.

Even though I’ve been on vacation, I’ve been doing things. Me and my son have been working on his computer system. It’s the one thing he likes, and I want him to  grow with this.