What improvements I made to my last essay

Essay: Louisiana, Then and Now

How do I feel about my essay, and what improvements did I make.


I made a lot of improvement to my essay. I was amazing, as I was learning at the same time as I was writing, things needed to change. The most dramatic part of the process was that I stopped putting words on paper, and started putting feeling in words. I started to have more fun, and it became even more exciting. When I started to write with more description the story became more lifelike. If you use color, smell, touch, sight, and taste, it can be more interesting and filling to the reader.

I worked hard to improve on my theses statement. Still a lot of work to do, but I’m sure that the next one will be much better. It’s just a process that I’m working on. I’m not the most creative person I know, but as I start to enjoy it, I can learn much faster. So now that I kind of have a clue as to what, and how the theses statement is used, I can see the creative use of it.

O.K. I’ve probably used the same work multiple times, and I’m working on that to. It makes for a better read to have different works. I’ll start using the Thesaurus more to make my writing a bit better to read.

On my last draft, I was able to employ the closing statement with much better results. In fact I think I did a rather good job. The closing is one of the best parts of the essay, and it gives the conclusion and results to the theses of the essay. With that last line, I wonder if I did use the conclusion to the best of its potential.

Anyway, my thoughts about my last essay are that it was a great enlightening experience for me. I was able to pick up lots of thing I had no clue about. It’s only been 4 weeks, so I can only imagine what else I can learn about creative writing.